Night Mistress

wow, ash. as i said befoe in the other chapters, better than before. i like the part about sophia's birth mother. will we ever get to meet her in the ...

hey ash, it's a lot better then flows more smoother than before too. i like this version i alot better. i am thinking about going back myself and edited the ...

She only thinks she is through with Charlie, but she's not, is she? i really like this chapter. it may me want to cry at the end, because charlie is ...

oh, this sounds good. are you going to continue it? i love this girl. i wish i had the confidence to stand up to my peer like that. i wonder ...

okay, that's was wired. i thought jasper liked being around her. and what the "i have no right to say that"? is he just saying that or is it for ...

okay, this story is getting stranger and stranger. so what is jasper if he isn't dead? elipsy, so that would explain the seizure. Damien, still she hasn't figure out deal ...

the only thing i found wrong was: 1) what with the seizure? and her meds? you should go into detial about that. but other than that, everything seems fine now. ...

oh, plot twist. but i knew james had to be her third suitor. I knew what his plan was. he wanted her to fall in love with him first, but ...

looks like things are getting complex for sophia with jame's declartion of love. so now what? sounds like richard only marrying her for something. I'm happy for helena, but lucy ...

Lucy is again a brat for thinking she is better than Sophia. At least Sophia has some manners. I feel sorry for Helena for Lucy being her sister-in-law. and James ...

umm..... interesting. i was pulling for james and is still pulling for james. Richad maybe be handsom and a gentleman, but what about his private life? Have james ask sophia ...

Merry, why didn't you tell me you posted another chapter? have you forgotten about me? :sniffles: anyways, James is being wierd in this chapter. i am surprise he kiss her. ...

oh, this is getting intereesting. but there is one thing that bugs me. If Nora and Carmen are sohpia's friends, why aren't they hang around her? i hope carmen doesn't ...

Geez. just make the girl go out with Charlie. she is pratically obesses with the guy. this story is getting addictive, so write the five part fast. i'm off to ...

ohhh.... so it sounds like carmen and Sophia's friendship is end because of Nora. but isn't Sophia their uniter or something like that? so won't carmen always have a strong ...